estrella: Blogger 13: Catw 5 How to do one thing at a t...: "People do better their task when they do single tasks and multi-tasking peers do poor task. According to the author there are many methods t..."
The author's claim is " People do better their task when they do single tasks and multi-tasking peers to poor task. This is a good claim but it would be even better if the author wrote it in a clearer way. The author makes sure she uses examples and sources to back up her reasons. One source she used was a recent experiment from Stanford University. The author does good in not having too many run-on sentences and not talking about stuff that is irrelevant. Needs help to reorganize this sentence for better understanding. The author made really short paragraphs and she needs to make it more clear. I felt like she kept repeating herself. Also, there are many errors in her sentence structure which makes reading the essay difficult.
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